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C'mon you creeps! (17)

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Art Notes

""Yeah, we've captured a ship. Whoopee! Me first, me first!"

Now readers, this is more bloody like it! One of my fave pages ever.

I love this page because:

  • It's a really old one!
  • There's a sense of urgent action - focused on the beardy Death Star Officer and his over the shoulder command (really rude!); which, incidentally conjures an impression of yet more action and more off-screen players.
  • And because of the absolute silliness of the dialogue. The opening lines are silly enough but what about the final speech bubble by Han, at the bottom? An attempt at humour?

No, no, no. Intentional humour is never ever going to work. Far better playing it straight, like the characters in the movie Airplane. When you're only 9, the silliness just... comes. Still, I'm glad I did it. Completely daft.

Notice how "YOU BET SIR!" has been changed from "YOU BET LUKE"? This was supposed to make this older page flow from a latterly inserted page. I can't find the page that originally led into this one. It's a bit of a puzzle at times.

Ah, I feel good now after seeing this. Can I hold off adding more pages until the Monday Edition?

Film Notes

On the DVD I have of the lambasted Special Edition (which fortunately also comes with the original version on DVD) - the commentaries are wonderful. Ben Burtt's are fascinating. George talks about the Falcon in the Death Star hangar and the fact that it's parked pointing into the station. When it came to them making their getaway it struck them that it posed a bit of a practical problem. They hadn't considered how it would get out. The rest of what George said about this was so fascinating that it must have damaged the part of my brain that's used for remembering fascinating things. Oh, I can't be arsed... Good night all.

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The Falcon is pulled into the Death Star Hangar and the search begins - comic panels

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+1 # C'mon you creeps!BlueMilkSpecial 2011-04-22 19:01
The dialogue in your adaptation is so MARVEL at times! LOL. Also, its kind of cute to hear the Stormtrooper's exuberance at capturing a ship. Not a specific ship. Just any ship at all. Maybe they'd tried a few times and failed? LOL.

The art is actually quite exciting. There definitely is urgency and energy to the panels. I love it!
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0 # RE: C'mon you creeps!John I. White 2011-04-22 20:39
Quoting BlueMilkSpecial:
...the Stormtrooper's exuberance at capturing a ship. Not a specific ship. Just any ship at all. Maybe they'd tried a few times and failed? LOL.


Ha ha! Bloody brilliant!
"Governor Tarkin - Gov.Tarkin!!! Ooh - ooh - ooh!" (hopping up and down)
"Yesssssss..?"
"We ACTUALLY - captured a ship!"

Reminds me of Slim Pickens and Hedley Lamarr in Blazing Saddles or something!
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+1 # RE: C'mon you creeps! (17)Casey 2011-04-22 19:09
Haha, best dialogue! I love how you show the bubbles from the Falcon rather than in the hanger. Lovely over use of green in that first panel ;)
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0 # RE: RE: C'mon you creeps! (17)John I. White 2011-04-22 20:40
Must have been a brand new pack of Caran Dache felt-tip pens! :lol:
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+1 # RE: C'mon you creeps! (17)Neil 2011-04-22 19:39
That 'Yeah! we've captured a ship!" is hilarious - makes me think of the Death Star like some inept fisherman. An allegory that was expanded upon in ESB - premonition?
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0 # RE: RE: C'mon you creeps! (17)John I. White 2011-04-22 20:44
"expanded upon in ESB" Eh?

You mean they were bloody useless at catching Luke? - and had to hire bounty hunters. Not only that but 'Boba I Don't Really Do A Lot Fett'?
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0 # RE: RE: RE: C'mon you creeps! (17)neil 2011-04-22 23:57
I was thinking more along the lines of "Good. Our first catch of the day."
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0 # RE: RE: RE: RE: C'mon you creeps! (17)John I.White 2011-04-23 08:57
I'd completely forgotten that line, then last night 'Something, something, Darkside' was on and it was quoted. "Whattya mean? You don't even fish!"

"Ahhh, now I see what Neil meant." I actually can't remember that line in the film at all!
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+1 # RE: C'mon you creeps! (17)T.Gatto 2011-04-22 19:53
I'm leaving a comment, but please feel free to kill or otherwise maim the Ewok anyway. ;)

Oh wait that's not enough of a comment.

OK, I love the light switch looking horns on the officer's hat. He definately doesn't strike me as having much pride in his uniform.

I wonder; If all Star Wars footage, books, and other comics were lost over time, and (hundreds of years from now) your comic was the only remnant left, what would the ensuing movie made from your works be like?
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0 # RE: RE: C'mon you creeps! (17)John I. White 2011-04-22 20:49
Lightswitch - :D

I can almost give the prize for best ever comment Tom:
"I wonder; If all Star Wars footage, books, and other comics were lost over time, and (hundreds of years from now) your comic was the only remnant left, what would the ensuing movie made from your works be like?"

It's a parody of George's statement that "a hundred years from now, all that'll be left is the Special Editions". Er no, George. You're wrong. DEAD wrong. THIS document will be the definitive version. Your films will be more like the 'Q Gospel' - one of the lost original versions that influenced SWa9. :lol:

It's just too funny. The irony - the irony!
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+1 # RE: RE: RE: C'mon you creeps! (17)Aelfrey 2011-12-10 10:43
Hopefully all that'll be left is this and BMS!
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+1 # RE: C'mon you creeps! (17)Damien Slattery 2011-04-22 21:20
Meinks the great John was not actually born and reared in Ireland. His prose and dialogue come from a galaxy far, far away. Which is a good thing!
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0 # RE: RE: C'mon you creeps! (17)John I.White 2011-04-22 22:43
...as long as it STAYS there!
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0 # RE: C'mon you creeps! (17)Sam Thoburn 2011-04-23 03:28
I watched the commentaries and they seamed very boring to me. There was some fascinating stuff in it for sure but it sounded like they were all in different rooms being recorded at different times, there was no conversing, no stories about some odd day on set. it was a very empty commentary.
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0 # RE: RE: C'mon you creeps! (17)John I.White 2011-04-23 08:59
I think you would have appreciated more Carrie Fisher contributions. She was very forthright - obviously not the least bit worried about what George might think!
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+1 # RE: C'mon you creeps! (17)T.Gatto 2011-04-25 17:22
What no update today, and in the midst of my BMS withdrawell, I'm most sorely upset by this! :cry:

Why I have half a mind to fly over there and give you a piece of my mind. :-x

Wouldn't that be a kick in the teeth. 8)

How much Guiness would customs permit me to bring back to the U.S. A. anyway? Always got to check the important issues before taking a trip I could never afford in the first place. :sigh:
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0 # RE: RE: C'mon you creeps! (17)John I.White 2011-04-25 18:41
Who knows Tom? In a fit of remorse around 9pm - our time - I might put it together. Failing that maybe I'll do a Tuesday edition?
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